Monday, October 13, 2014

100 word chellenge

Prompt: ...I could not believe the smell...

Frost bitten toes wiggle like worms under the warm comfort of the woolly sheet. A cool sensation, fills the sun lighten room. Freshly made bread squeezes through the cracks in the floor boards, expanding through the creaky farm house. Thumping foot steeps wander down the creaky stairs but something doesn't seem right. I could not believe the smell food stretched as far as the eye could see. I plucked a red apple before mum came. Hot cakes made my mouth water. I was worried because I have never been good. I am always bad so I am worried about this.

2 comments:

  1. Please link the post not your blog. Team 100 won't be able to find your 100wc if you have posted other bits & pieces.
    Could you also add 'Name' to the drop down menu so that anyone can leave a comment.
    Thanks
    Mrs Skinner (Team 100)

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  2. Excellent use of imagery in your descriptive writing, very vivid.

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