block 1 evaluation

this block I have started one piece of writing and finished my writing on a tiger. I have also finished my 100 word challenge. I have been down in a writing group.


My tiger writing:

A lean body stands motionless watching and waiting. A slow chuffing sound comes from the belly of the beast. Her ears prick back listening to the roaring sound of the jungle, suddenly everything is quiet. Her black and orange stripes move up and down and she crouches into the low grass camouflaging herself from passing predators. Her long silky whiskers twitch with frustration. Her hart pounds, then her predator instinct kicks in. She races through the jungle her large retractable claws swiping at trees. She stops, she feels the world waiting for her she can’t do it. She knows that if she doesn’t she will die. She never thought that killing could be so hard. Her canine teeth hang out thirsty for the taste of blood. She is the Queen. She hunts to survive she is a predator, she is a killer, she is savage.