100 word chellenge ...but as the leaves rustled...

The last leaf fell from the oak tree I ran in to the cool autumn air. I ran through the leaves that had gathered on the ground but as the leaves rustled I screamed. A look of pure terror swept my face.  My brother appeared from the ground and  burst out laughing "you should have seen your face" he fell over in a hump holding his stomach as he laughed at me. My face turned red as apple as I stood in shock. " You did that" I hissed "Yep" he said through small breaths. "Your so mean" I mumbled as I walked away. 

what is conservation

Conservation is the action of preserving something.

the message of the skit was switching thongs off at the wall you can save power and that means you have extra money to spend on different things. You can save power by switching play stations off at the wall etc. You can also have short showers.

100 word chellenge ( night zookeeper )

Prompt: ...He was shocked to find...

He was shocked to find a majestic beast. A coat pure as snow, eyes blue as the ocean, the beasts muscular feature stood strong. Lord Nulth stood confused. " You have done a great injustice" the beast spoke. A loud screeching echoed through the dark lair. "What are you?" A look of terror swept the room. They knew who this was. The guards eyes burned a fiery red.  King Matias whispered three words " You must pay." He let out a roar causing the roof crumble then fall. Lord nulth died. The animals were set free from the curse and no one saw King Matias ever again.

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sadness

Sadness feels distant and far away
Sadness tastes bitter and gloomy
Frowns deepen on a distorted face
Hiding the broken and hurt
Sharp daggers pierce your soul
You feel alone and miserable
Depression takes you
That's what sadness is.

100 word net

Prompt: ...as it shivered they...

The church was silent but a hot smelly breath lingered in the night air. The nun sat hunched in a corner along with her dog Fred. A loud grumbling rang through the church. "ITs here" whispered the nun with a shaky voice. "STOMP, STOMP" the best was enclosing on them. Red beady eyes stared at them. The beast stood up on it hind legs as it shivered they made a run for it. Sweat poured from the nuns fore head but as soon as they were out of the way of the beast they died from exhaustion.

100 word chellenge

Prompt: Broken     Green     Swimming     Cat     Lifted

The green cat smiled sneakily across at me.  I smiled back. A glass smashed on the floor I jumped for it but missed. The cats grin grew. Shattered glass went everywhere is was I was swimming in blood. Suddenly I burst out laughing. The cat gave me an odd smile but that wasn't all.  Two piercing eyes dug into my back. I turned round although all I could see was a broken couch. I pared through the curtains and lifted the window. Eyes stared at me I was so scared but I couldn't move is this how it ends

100 word chellenge

The hooded figure watched passing travellers with beady eyes. I watched horrified at the cloaked figure's yellow eyes watch me staring into the abyss. Crunching leaves capture my attention. The daylight seeps after my friend. The trees creek and whine. I feel alone, my friend is distant I tried to call her but not sound comes from my mouth. An icy hand touches my back I turn round but no ones there. Then it appears I reach out to the figure and touch the cold metal it freezes it stand life less. No movement not a single breath.

 
 



Athletics goals

my althletics goal is to get through the day and pass the shot put and cricket ball throw and meet the standard.

I can do this by practicing and getting better.  

How to note take

How to note take:


1. eliminate un-necessary words
2. ask questions before, during and after
3. You can draw pictures
4. little words instead of sentences
5. add on additional information to the points you already have
6. highlight the points that go together
7. use symbols such as @, e.c.t, e.g
8. take out the vowels- understand- std
9. put it in your own words
10. jot down key points
11. teach someone else
12. review- go over the information you have noted down

100 word chellenge

Prompt: ...I could not believe the smell...

Frost bitten toes wiggle like worms under the warm comfort of the woolly sheet. A cool sensation, fills the sun lighten room. Freshly made bread squeezes through the cracks in the floor boards, expanding through the creaky farm house. Thumping foot steeps wander down the creaky stairs but something doesn't seem right. I could not believe the smell food stretched as far as the eye could see. I plucked a red apple before mum came. Hot cakes made my mouth water. I was worried because I have never been good. I am always bad so I am worried about this.

100 word net

Prompt: Pepper    Crocodile    Orange    Forgot    Soft


Gleaming eyes stare at me, pepper and orange start to growl. The moaning wind slams the front door tightly shut. A fishy breath makes the hair on my back stand up. I sit up. sweat pours from my face. I turn round and feel a soft scaly skin rubbing against the tips of my fingers. I open my mouth to scream but no sound comes out. I turn to switch the light on but I forgot where the switch was. I shake with fear. I turn my head to the front they are still staring at me there beady eyes entwined with mine. A crocodile stares at me licking its chops. is this how it ends?
 

Tthe caged tiger

What was once a mighty beast, which walked with pride and power, now begged from food by the thing that put him there, humans. He hated them they took everything away his family and friends they were so selfish and uncaring. He wanted so badly to be free and feel the wind beneath his fur and hear the rustling of the leaves that was a good time. He moped around and didn’t care he sat there all day and night year after year watching people laugh and point at him. He was imprisoned for life and no one could do anything. A pool of water lapped at the front of this bared prison. Over dated meat sat in lumps all around the enclosure. It made him dizzy and confused. His wet tongue flopped out of his mouth. His nose was good at sniffing anymore. His coat was too polished, he didn’t like it this way. He liked to feel the hard mud stiffing in his dirty coat but not anymore. Nothing was the same as it once was.

block 1 evaluation

this block I have started one piece of writing and finished my writing on a tiger. I have also finished my 100 word challenge. I have been down in a writing group.


My tiger writing:

A lean body stands motionless watching and waiting. A slow chuffing sound comes from the belly of the beast. Her ears prick back listening to the roaring sound of the jungle, suddenly everything is quiet. Her black and orange stripes move up and down and she crouches into the low grass camouflaging herself from passing predators. Her long silky whiskers twitch with frustration. Her hart pounds, then her predator instinct kicks in. She races through the jungle her large retractable claws swiping at trees. She stops, she feels the world waiting for her she can’t do it. She knows that if she doesn’t she will die. She never thought that killing could be so hard. Her canine teeth hang out thirsty for the taste of blood. She is the Queen. She hunts to survive she is a predator, she is a killer, she is savage.

100 word chellenge

Prompt: But it is yellow


Eyes pierced my back watching and waiting ready to hold me and never let go. As I walk along the moonlit shore, the smell of blood lingers in the cool night air. I see a figure out of the corner of my eye, I can’t quite see who it is. I can taste the bitterness of the sand beneath my feet. I turn around slowly but it is yellow the creature standing there so majestic and proud. I open my mouth to scream but no sound comes out. I am frozen with fright. I think is this how it ends.

 

 

This is a significant photo to me because it reminds me how Christmas looks like at my house. Christmas is a time when my family gets together and celebrates with each other. The fresh smell of baked potato's, chicken, carrots and gravy lingers in the cold night air.  Family members are rushing round getting presents under the tree and plates on the table. My mum brings out a massive chicken she calls dinner time it sounds like a hundred elephants feet crashing against the tiled floor.

100 Word chellenge

Prompt: .....Finally we can make a start.....

Candle wax drips down the cake and starts too pool in puddles. I wait motionless staring at the wall in front of me, finally we can make a start laughter fills the room and I run around like a headless chicken singing from the top of my lungs. Music fills my ears and drop to the floor unable to breath then I realise I have been poisoned my hart slows down and all I can see is a white light.-88 Its to late im gone and there is nothing anyone could do about it.

Mood writing

Sadness passes through everyone it makes you feel distant and far away. IT tastes like bitter and un-wanting hiding its self from the wandering eye and latching its self on to the broken and escaping from the happy. Sadness makes frowns deepen and hatred harden its alone and sorrowful its depression and slow. It sticks and doesn't let go its like a sharp dagger poking you making you hurt and abandoned. Salty tears stick to your pale face. All you can hear is the silent weeping and the constant beating of your hart against your chest.

REAL Learner goal- Respect

my goal is to be encouraging and inclusive towards my team mates. I can do this when someone makes a wrong move to say that they can do better next time.

The street

Lights flicker below towering buildings coving the deserted street with light. Trees stand proud and tall as piercing wind thrashes against the fragile leaves. The low howling wind whisks up and over colossal  street lights. Thunder clouds loom in the distance armed and ready to fire. A single light from a building tempts the wandering eye. Steadfast alleyways haunt the deserted streets casting ghastly shadows along the walls. There is no escape.

Moment in time

Moment time:

Sweat drips off my face and lands on the gravel. My body is side ways marking my player. The whistle goes and my legs charge forward following my player im hot on her trail I go for the intercept my legs spring off the ground with power and force I get it I land with a thud and look for one of my team mates to get free. I pass. Im off again running with speed and agility I come to a screeching stop the other team has stolen the ball back. I run to the shooting circle. I stop to catch my breath, bad mistake they shoot but don't get it. I jump and whack it out that was a close one.

The light house

The majestic light house stood proudly, eyeing the distant ships warning them of the danger ahead. the rolling waves rose then fell, breaking like shattered glass as they reached out for the beach. Smokey clouds linger motionless in the darkness. pointed rocks protect the full impact of the growing waves as they rage. The moon tries to push through the cloudy sky.

The monster

Wrinkles scar her face from smiles that once made the world happy. Each line is unique and tells a different story, some of when she was younger and use to run about smiling in the sun and some of when relitives died and and her frowns deepened. Old and broken but playing pretend. When ever she yells the whole world goes cold and people run away screaming from the pain and stress that has turned her world upside down.

If you ever get called out she will stand over you and make you feel weak and scared she looks deep into your sole and makes you feel her pain and anger. She crushes you like a bug but never did she once make you feel happy or even joy. Her place is like a prision icsloted and scared building walls so know one can reach her blocking out friends and family and hating on people she dosent like . Her clothes are boring and they make the whole world frown. Her hart is as cold as stone and know one can get through to her not even her own daughters.

Her snake like eyes perice the hart from anything good or evil, she sucks you dry from any good ness left in you. She is the worst person to be around if you were kind harted and soft she would make you cry the minute you saw her and you would be terified that she might come kill you in the night (she is down right capable of that) you can feel her horrible pressence from miles around you better get out of her way if you know what is good for you.

People run screaming from a monster that has turned shuch lovly person into something that people never thought possible. Her teeth glision with the blood of inicont lives she has taken she licks her lips as to say that was nice. Bloody foost steeps follow her as she is getting ready to take the life of her next victum. You can she how much she is enjoying crushing them she is a MONSTER and will always be one.

She knew nothing better to do as she was treated the exact same way. Alouthough she tried to hide behind a mask and start again she will never be able to get away from the fact she has ruined many peoples and crushed many dreams of thousands. Some people say she has 1,000,000 cats and no soul. As she hurd the sound of death comming to collect her she ran but could not escape alouthough it sounds very greusome i have to say she had it coming. Though she was draged by death she found a way back to the light and out of the darkness she found the one they call so powerful or who people call the creater he can pull you out of hell he is the master of life and death but he is the also the master of love and peace. Though some people think he is not real people thre are people that do they know that he will for give your sin and bring them back to the light no matter what, he wants everyone to be his children and in the end we all get to go to heaven. Such a pretty face lost but then found and brought back to its natrual beauty.

In the end whatever is lost must be found no matter how long it takes everyone desurves a second chance and just because you are different or people bully you everyone is special to god i really dont like m teacher but like Nelson Mandela once said " The greates glory in living is not never failing but rising everytime you fall" this means that know matter how much you get pushed down or rejected if you be persistant people will learn that you are special and needed to be treated like a normal person and not like a stranger but like a friend.

Character Description

A reflective yellow vest hangs over his hunched shoulders. A patterned bandanna was knotted behind his head. A black walky-talky clung to his side waiting to give out his next instructions. Worn-out sneakers were placed on his aching feet. his vague face looked out at the roaring city. his eyes were remote and sad. his buff feature rested gloomily on bags of cement.

 

 

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Ikan Evaluation

I went up one level in basic facts and fractions.
I had trouble with place value because I miss red the question.
I need to work on reading the questions so that i can get the correct answer.

100 word chellenge

prompt: ....the forest seemed alive as...

Boom the sound of thunder fills my ears. I scurry through the old forest without looking back. I wip round as I sense someone watching me. Worms move beneath my feet. I scream I want to get out of this place. The forest seemed alive as though the trees could move and then talk to each other. I kept going and pushed the thoughts to the back of my mind. I reached the end of the forest and sniffed in the sweet essence of spring. I lay on the cool grass and looked at the bright blue sky, i closed my eyes and listened to the soft moaning of the wind. 

100 word challenge

...but it was far too hot…

Even though it was winter today was the hottest day we have had this year it was over forty degrees. All the fans in our house were going but it was far too hot to do anything all the shops had been closed this morning, people were inside with all the windows and doors open with fans going at the highest they could go people with cold lemonade mocked us as we watch them cool down. The heat bursts through the atmosphere and we melt as the rays hit us. This is the end of the hottest day.

100 word challenge

An ambulance speeds down the street followed by three police cars and two fire engines they race to the giant egg that has fallen out of the sky. Already at the scene are three work men one is on top of the strange egg the other two are on the ground inspecting the yolk. The magnificent egg sits still waiting and wondering if it could ever begin again. The egg fell from heaven it was going to be a golden goose but its mother had accidentally kicked it off it was a horrid day as she watch the egg die.  

Water

100 word challenge

gateway,black,cold,friend

The cold frost nipped at my nose as i walked speedily to my friends house. When I arrived the house was locked it was black and mysterious I went and looked through the old creaky windows, the wind howled through the house and I started running I didn't like this at all. I heard a tree branch snap and i wiped round shivering suddenly the street came awake with lights and colours it was so beautiful i gasped as i saw my friend walk out of a gateway behind me. i ran and gave my her a hug.

Marie Curie was a posh naturalized french physicist and chemis who conducted research on radioactivity. She was the first women ever to win a Nobel prize she was also the first women to win it in two different categorizes. She was also the only person to win multiple sciences. She was the first women to be a professor at the university of Paris. She was famous because she won many Nobel prizes and she inspired many other scientist she discovered radium and polonium which helped invent x-rays.

Marie curie was born on November 7 1867 she lived a full life and became very famous as she discovered radioactivity she also discovered polonium and radium. She later married a man called Pierre and they had two daughters called Irene and eve. Marie Curie died on 4 July 1934, in Savoy, France. She died of a plastic anaemia, a blood disease that often results from exposure to large amounts of radiation. She died at the age of 66.